Thursday, March 5, 2009

Still living without them

Blinded through the eyes,
where sight lies.
Distinguishing feeling; sometimes soft or hard,
I still know the way through my yard.

Hearing outside all the sounds
this sense just has no bounds.
My sense of smell is so good,
that I can smell a bandit in my hood.

Without them, I barely have to try,
but sometimes you'll hear a cry.
They are dead, my eyes
but it doesn't mean with them my senses dies.

2 comments:

Katrina said...

Excellent job! I felt there were a few lines which did not go with the flow of the poem but other than that it was great. The senses you used were portrayed very well.

Ms.C said...

This poem could have evoked the senses more.